Invite Me In: A Salon Games novel Kindle Edition

Didn’t feel the love. The H and his best friend share the h towards the end. It appeared the two of them shared a number of women quite frequently as a way to avoid ties. He has feelings for the h. Why sharing if he felt like that?Would have appreciated a ménage warning.

I honestly wanted to like this book for the story. But the issues far outweighed any benefits. First of all, there seems to have been little to no editing. The author cannot decide whether or not to use ellipses, m-dash, n-dash, random number of spaces, and so on, to organize continued thoughts and separation. She called her main character, named Jared, Joshua at one point. Several common phrases were used incorrectly. And almost every intimate scene was the same terminology, the same order, the same stuff. And it is titled for the Salon, which the couple only visited once together. I mean, it could have been called The Gallery Games more appropriately since they pretty much spent the majority of the time at her house. Repetitive, unnecessary sex scenes made for a boring read, and after a while I began to skim until I got through it merely so I could get to the end and review it for the errors it was riddled with. Edit, edit, edit, review, revise, edit some more—then I may change my review.

This didn't start out so bad but I didn't realize this a multiple partner sex chronicle. I was hoping for romance and plot. Not my taste.

This novel confused me. One minute Jared is possessive over Annabelle and the next minute he is sharing her with his best friend. Yet, he dislikes his dad for cheating on his mom. Not to mention, that Jared’s grandma believes the jewels stolen from the Golden family has helped the family members find true love for generations. Guess who happens to have a long lost piece of the jewelry, Belle.

Terrific read the story of Jared and Belle left me breathless at times. Well written, great characters interesting references. Had to investigate all the references made and found once again you are never too old to learn. The H/H are super in themselves and as a couple. You need to read this for yourself as long as you are comfortable with in depth steamy scenes that are well described. 4.5 Stars from me I knocked off .5 for poor editing again!

I really, really wanted to like this book. I love reading about “sex clubs” and kinky stuff. BUT, I didn’t like this book. This is only the second book I have ever NOT finished. It jumped around from his point of view back to hers without a split in paragraphs or chapters. It was hard to keep up.I will say, however, the sex scenes were super HOT!!The book needed much better structure and editing in my opinion.

I truly enjoyed this book and happy to rate it a 5*. It was well written, matured book. Reading through the pages, allowed to indulge into a few fantasies perhaps may otherwise afraid to do.I'm routing for Kate n Tyler to seal their relationship. However, I don't think it would be well written and received in the same manner as this one. Enjoy

Lots of steamy scenes, though they are repetitive in moves and reactions. I found myself just skimming through those scenes. Characters are thinly drawn. I didn’t really “get” either of them & why they wanted long term. The plot premise is good, just not a lot of fullness, especially the end. Just seems like the author had a deadline and theeeeeere’s the end of the book. The realizations that they love each other is barely there.

A super sexy and very steamy read. Jared and Belle have a unique relationship that started off as an illicit encounter. There is family intrigue and true passion for art in this story.

Very good storyline which blends well with the very sexy and erotic relationship between the two main characters. Thoroughly enjoyed it and looking forward to the next in the series.

Read the reviews by others for this book and I admit I'm confused...did we read the same book? It wasn't fast paced. It laboured along.The author needs to invest in a proof-reader, reread her own editing and figure out which name her leading male character is called. Jared or Joshua? And, what's with all of the underscoring? Is it some new editing trick to throw the reader off? Or, just a lazy author? Don't they know the difference between a hyphen and an underscore?Just a tip to writers, don't have all of your characters use the same mental chatter, especially phrases. Although it might be the author's 'go to' expression, it's doubtful that everyone else uses it as well. When that happens it blares loud and clear that the story is from one person and not what the characters are really thinking. Complete disaster from a reader's point of view.One other thing, although one character thinks about the value of anticipation, the author doesn't seem to know what this is. I suggest the author read authors who know how to keep people turning pages and not just to skip the boring repetitions!Overall, there were far too many mistakes and not enough really decent story bits. Don't recommend this author.

This was a sweet read with plenty of sizzle. Very well written, you could feel the chemistry jumping off the pages. Very likeable H & H and a good storyline. You will need to like plenty of steamy sex and a couple of M/F/M scenes to enjoy this one. I loved Jared. He was sexy as hell and had a great personality, some family and friends involvement made it a very enjoyable read. Cannot wait for Tyler and Kate to get together.

It is what it promises in book preview. Well written and beautifully presented. I could have given it 5 but for over the top some of the clichés...