Abduction: A Mpreg Yaoi Alien Romance Kindle Edition

At first, I just thought this was another MM alien w/tentacle love story (which btw I love). But, this book is so much more and has a very serious side to it - it speaks to respect, humanity, tolerance, and love. Additionally, there are both subtle and overt tones of the importance of exploration and even taking care of the planet on which we reside. Such a serious message for such a seemingly random piece of entertainment. This is one of the best books I have read to date. It is super cute, an easy read, with invaluable lessons for one and all. Who could ask for more? I’m so excited — will have to look for other books by this author. Would definitely recommend.

This little novel really hits about every kink in the YAOI alien tentacle mpreg genre and it is glorious for that. I much prefer larger stories with lots of character development and shifting plots and locations but this was still a nice little YAOI story with good, kinky sex. It also delves a bit into the psychology of the YAOI D/s relationships which is really nice since when I try to explain the genre to others they are aghast at how...rapey... it is.My only complaint is that there is very little to distinguish the human male in the relationship from a female, especially after his body modification. There is A LOT of emphasis continually placed on his new female sex organs during the sex scenes to the point where you kinda begin to wonder what the point of this being a YAOI story is (but not enough to make the story bad or anything). The fact that the man even has a penis is only mentioned a couple of times and the fact he loses half of his male genitals is barely touched upon. I mean really, I know this is written by and for women but a man who loses his testicles is going to have a pretty big psychological crisis. There is plenty of other original fiction in this genre out there that covers this kind of body transformation and resulting psychological arguments better. And, I guess this is where a YAOI manga and a story can reach audiences differently as a manga will still give you the visuals while the descriptions in a story are left up entirely to the author and what their focus is. And really the only reason I bring any of this up is BECAUSE this story itself delves into some of the other psychological aspects of the D/s and YAOI relationships.Still, there are enough emotional twists and kinky sex to be well worth the price and I still love this story for generally covering every major kink (some that I like and some that I don't) in this sort of sub-genre and the fact that it is still well-written and characterized despite the focus on the kinky sex is definitely an achievement.

What did I just read... and why was it amazing. Creepy, scary, kinda gross, but amazing. I'm not stranger to that BL life and have seen my share of human v. Alien interactions, but when I tell you I will never watch the movie Aliens the same, this book is to blame. If you want a very educational look at an inter species relationship that starts out kinda enemies to lovers but ends with a HEA but also containing gender altering, M pregnancy , large eggs and happily ruined neather regions, you got yourself a 5 star book!!! Bravo Miss Rae. Ya got me as a fan!!!

Firstly, the basis of the story, the plot, was an interesting one. It had a very good start to it that was enticing and draws you in. Very well done. However, the biggest flaw this book has is once it gets to the point of that main part of the story the language is so course, repetitive, over used, and cliche that it breaks the ability to keep the mental picture and smoothness and elegance of the story going. An editor for the book is a MUST, and that is for any book. Using synonyms and other adjectives that will keep the story flowering in the proper rhythm is a necessity to keep the reader interested. Once the book hit the point of 'Oh Lord here we go again with the cliches and SAME verbiage all over again,' I quickly lost interest and actually skipped a whole paragraph because of it. That is what needs to be fixed for this to be a good book worth keeping. Otherwise it's mediocre at best currently. Overall the author is decent. As I mentioned before the plot itself is a good one for a short novella read. But it needs to be edited, rewritten, and then republished to make for a better book overall. The same adjectives will turn off a market audience faster than you can snap fingers top gain their attention. Best to find new ones to use interchangeably, and that doesn't mean only using two or three. Five or more is best for effective writing.